Critiques - September 6

Critiques September 6, 2016

·         Set looks good

·         Make sure everyone is on the beat into the song

·         Everyone needs to sit up at the same time.

o   Sit up - Ooh,Ooh, it’s a long way down, a long way down

o   Stand up -Check the cupboard for your daddy’s gun

o   Buddy falls in (Red sun rises like an early warning)

o   Mom jumps in - The Lord’s gonna come for your first born son

o   Mom saves Buddy -His hair’s on fire and his heart is burning.

o   Mom gets tangled in the sea weed - Go to the river where the water runs

o   River people encircle Mom – Left stage dances off right. Right Stage dances off left with Mom.

o   Everyone off stage by And if you fall.... And if you fall....

o   People who are in the next scene need to exit on the side of the stage of their next entrance.

·         Kate M lean farther forward when circle swaying

·         Kristen be more dramatic with arms

·         Men actors look at the way the girls are swaying

·         Left stage is off on swaying.

·         Kristen, are you confused about the dancing?

·         Sarah, watch fidgeting with your hands.

·         Colin – be loud and clear

·         Gage, sound more worried when CC mentions being clean.  Gage, guttural people noises through out show.  Scratching should begin from get go, but subtle, then more frantic.

·         Kate M, be more clear when you yell Daddy.

·         Gage – DICTION

·         Breck – louder.  Use more emotion and act older

·         Breck – say don’t swallow as if CC is an idiot, not so concerned.

·         Breck – louder – where have you been?

·         Alee, louder

·         Sarah, louder

·         Breck, good facial expressions.

·         Gage, stumble over irregular… laugh it’s a funny word

·         Alee – talk, clearer

·         Will, louder and more facial expressions.  Love you on shovel handle

·         EVERYONE – Watch the 700 Club.

·         Breck – There’s no way YOU’re gonna get him…….

·         Script memorized by Sunday – ENTIRE SCRIPT

·         Needs – a witching stick, sack, vegies, etc for women walking through.feather duster, rags. Blanket Colors for set.  Neutral colors.

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